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  • The Jewels Sparkle Still

     Chaya’la updated 1 month, 1 week ago 6 Members · 8 Posts
  • Chaya’la

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    October 20, 2020 at 5:42 pm

    <p>I was inspired to write this poem when I though about how we Jews retain our sparkle despite the depreciation Golus puts us through. </p>

  • HappiWriter

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    October 20, 2020 at 6:06 pm

    <p>Wow! wow! Chaya’la This poem is so stunning.</p><p>Just my type ;)</p>

  • Leahle

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    October 20, 2020 at 7:11 pm

    Beautiful, beautiful poem!!!!! Absolutely stunning!!!!I think I still like rhyming poems better than non-rhyming ones… Sorry everyone…

  • Chaya’la

    Member
    October 20, 2020 at 7:35 pm

    <p>Thank you Happiwriter- I’m glad we have shared interests;)</p><p>Leah’la, I appreciate your honest feedback. The reason why most of my poems are usually rhyming is because I’m a lyrical writer and this is just how my brain’s been wired. So glad you enjoy it too:) I find it to have more of a rhythm and simpler flow this way…</p>

  • PassionforWriting

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    October 20, 2020 at 9:46 pm

    Beautiful!!!

  • Anagrammer

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    October 20, 2020 at 10:28 pm

    <p>Gorgeous, Chayala! The words, the rhyme, the message…</p>

  • Rochel Solomon

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    October 20, 2020 at 11:44 pm

    First of all 1000 points for the presentation. Second, wonderful. I happen to love the layout and the fourth and fifth stanza’s. I think that’s the core message of the poem. Love it!

  • Chaya’la

    Member
    October 21, 2020 at 7:06 pm

    <p>Thank you for your prompt and positive feedback Passion, Ana, and Rochel:)</p><p>Rochel the reason for the presentation is more than for scoring points for “good looks”. (although I won’t decline them!)</p><p>I find that my formatting gets messed up when I post poems. So to quote a fellow Masterpiecer: “I feel like I post my baby without dressing it properly” </p>

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