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     HappiWriter updated 1 month, 1 week ago 4 Members · 6 Posts
  • missnistar

    Member
    September 7, 2020 at 3:50 am

    (Please excuse the simplicity… Poetry is unchartered territory for me.)

     

    I search

    And I yearn

    For the other half of my soul.

     

    I pray

    And I cry

    For the children I’ve yet to bear.

     

    I weep

    And I mourn

    The loneliness I must endure.

     

    I hope

    And I trust

    The Perfect Goodness behind it all.

  • riva pomerantz

    Administrator
    September 7, 2020 at 6:48 am

    Missnistar, you should definitely try navigating through more uncharted territory if this beautiful poem is your first attempt. Wow! There is so much pain mixed with so much hope in this piece, and I am just struck by how profoundly you brought it home by highlighting Hakadosh Baruch Hu’s Perfect Goodness. Thank you for sharing this with us today! I don’t think we’ve met you before, so a huge welcome! 🙂 If you want to introduce yourself, we’d love to get to know you a bit. Here are a couple of fun Intro threads, if you’d like to check them out:

    https://masterpiece.rivapomerantz.com/forum/topic/hello-my-name-is/

    https://masterpiece.rivapomerantz.com/forum/topic/welcome-new-members-please-introduce-yourselves-here/

  • PassionforWriting

    Member
    September 7, 2020 at 4:43 pm

    Wow wow! I so relate to your poem as I too am single and hope to iyH have a family of my own. You are not alone!

    • missnistar

      Member
      October 19, 2020 at 9:22 pm
      Thanks so much for your feedback! I’m sorry for the late reply. I think I actually tried replying, but it got lost in the system update… I guess better late than never!
    • missnistar

      Member
      October 19, 2020 at 9:22 pm

      <p>and thanks for the empathy… It helps!</p>

  • HappiWriter

    Member
    October 19, 2020 at 10:04 pm

    <p>Simple but powerful :)</p>

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