Goodbye

[Raizel]

Here’s a snapshot poem I wrote about saying goodbye to my young daughter at the airport

 

Exquisite baby girl now grown

Not quite fully

Arms laced through giant backpack

Schleps her pulley

 

At checkpoint. Turns back. Nods. Half smiles

Ponytail bobs

My heart a broken heap on floor

Silently sobs

 

G-d, please watch her, lead her, bless her

Smooth road’s cracks

Exciting journey, she takes off

Mom will relax

[Brocha]

I lovvvvvve the rhythm!!!! You gave me a high!

[A Willing Pen]

oh. my. gosh.

i have a little baby girl and even now (crazy mamma) i’m wondering how I’ll ever let her say goodbye and go off on her own.

this hit the spot.

thank you 😉

[Sury]

Beautiful poem, Raizel!

[Raizel]

Thanks for reading and for your responses.

[Fayge Y.]

[quote quote=18547] she takes off Mom will relax[/quote]

 

One day. Maybe ;-D

Brief but packs so much in.

[Esther]

Your daughter is really lucky to have a mom like you…

[A Willing Pen]

My baby girl now has her own baby girl! Amazing to discuss and compare our childbirth experiences and baby raising!