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  • Good and Gone

     Elisheva Halle updated 2 months, 3 weeks ago 9Members · 13 Posts
  • Mali

    July 27, 2020 at 5:07 pm

    Good and Gone


    Lovely, little friend

    Sweet, enlightened hon

    Sometimes you’ve got to let em be

    Gone gone gone


    I see you trying hard

    Squinting for the sun

    But sometimes they just want to be

    Gone gone gone


    You chase after they fly

    You turn after they run

    You reach and see it has been going

    Gone gone gone


    No promise for the morrow

    Can’t say you’ll be done

    If they just carry on to be

    Gone gone gone


    You learn you got no handle

    You see there is just One

    That deems it is a sweet thing they be

    Gone gone gone



    This is open for interpretation, sweet, enlightened hon. If you draw a blank, I’ll be gone.

  • Chagit

    July 27, 2020 at 5:11 pm

    I love that this can be interpreted  in so many different ways!

    Excellent rhyme and rhythm:)

  • Mali

    July 27, 2020 at 5:13 pm

    Loving is not enough, Chagit. Interpret it for yourself:)

  • HappiWriter

    July 27, 2020 at 5:14 pm

    love your wording!

  • Fiction Fangirl

    July 27, 2020 at 5:49 pm

    Mali, you got a thing with words.  So much so, your poem evoked a certain image about the woes of friendship/nasty girls:

    Proceed with Caution

    She tattled and giggled and whispered to friends
    who hovered close like she was an exotic blend-
    you couldn’t understand unless you took a sip
    and became a victim ensnared by this witch
    Proceed with caution.

  • Mali

    July 27, 2020 at 6:04 pm

    Thanks HappiWriter. And FF- talk about a way with words.

    who hovered close like she was an exotic blend” Laughing. Do you think these things happen past high school?

  • Meira

    July 27, 2020 at 6:37 pm

    Wow, wow, Mali.

    Talk about interpreting it… I read it once, and thought of one thing, and then a second time and something different came to mind. This is fantastic!

  • Novice

    October 22, 2020 at 2:53 am

    Love this!!!! Thanks for sharing!

  • riva pomerantz

    October 22, 2020 at 10:17 am

    Wow! What an amazing, iridescent poem–can be interpreted in so, so many different ways. I found myself thinking first about the banal (clutter!), but as the poem progressed, I thought about raising children, and then about just…every aspect of life! Thank you for this sweet treat today!

  • Anagrammer

    October 22, 2020 at 1:38 pm

    <p>I first interpreted it as when you want something but He says ‘no’… And you can’t accept that if He doesn’t will it, it won’t be.</p><p>But now, suddenly, a dozen other thoughts came into my mind…</p><p>Wow. This is one of those poems that should be famous. Like when you google “Good and Gone”, thousands of results should come up with your name all over them – academic papers, interpretations, commentary, etc! I’m awed.<br></p>

    • Mali

      October 22, 2020 at 4:07 pm

      You rock. Blushing. Ok, also slipping a self-satisfied smile.

  • Mali

    October 22, 2020 at 4:06 pm

    Thank you Novice, Riva, Ana! This was posted a long time ago, funny how it was reawakened now:)I think I was referring to a loss of drives and goals and passions and sense of purpose…When they just aren’t there sometimes.

    • Elisheva Halle

      October 23, 2020 at 1:53 am

      <p>I thought of a mother saying bye to her child leaving home…beautiful!</p>

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