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  • arty10k

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    October 18, 2020 at 5:08 am

    would love feedback how to make this better, where and how this might be publishable

  • Anagrammer

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    October 18, 2020 at 7:50 pm

    <p>Arty10k, I love this! What a great story with such a unique perspective.</p><p>“…almost
    as if she imagined I were alive” –
    like the irony here (how the valise does, in fact, seem to be very much alive!). And I chuckled at how later on in the story, the adult Surche still seems to imagine the valise is alive.“Surche winked at me.”<br></p><p>“Like my owner, I was old and worn, but I still had plenty of life within me.” – love this sentence.</p>

  • arty10k

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    October 18, 2020 at 11:58 pm

    Thank you for the positive feedback–and for taking the time to read it. I cry whenever I reread this story. I would love to share it somehow with others, but havent yet found the venue to publish. Do you have any thoughts about that?.

  • Anagrammer

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    October 19, 2020 at 1:18 am

    <p>Yes, there is so, so much in this piece, such a rich and vibrant history of a Yiddishe family! I’m no publishing guru (barely done it myself), but I’m thinking it’s more geared for children…?</p>

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