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  • PassionforWriting

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    October 25, 2020 at 12:30 am

    Hi all I just wrote this and would love your feedback. Please let me know you have read this with a word or two in reply, even if you don’t have time for a longer comment. I really, really value your feedback.Thank you!

  • HappiWriter

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    October 26, 2020 at 7:18 pm

    πŸ‘πŸ‘<p>Is this based on your experience?</p>

  • PassionforWriting

    Member
    October 26, 2020 at 9:58 pm

    Oh! I just saw this! I guess you can feel free to comment on either thread. The first time I posted it, the reply button wasn’t working, so I thought that if I try posting it again, it might work.. so that’s why there are 2 of these threads. Thank you! Yes, it’s based on my personal experience, HappiWriter.

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