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  • Always Saying Yes

     Leahle updated 6 months, 2 weeks ago 7Members · 7 Posts
  • Drop-a-line

    Member
    June 23, 2020 at 1:43 pm

    FFF Friends For Favors

    When I go aaa
    you hear I
    aaaaaa-
    I
    aaaaaa-
    I

    When I go you
    you stay you
    you
    you
    you
    you

    When I go I
    You say bye
    I-
    bye
    I-
    bye

    When I go gone
    You are gone
    gone
    gone
    gone
    gone

    Then you go please
    I go no
    why-
    no
    because-
    no

    (I wish)

    Then you go please
    I go n-
    why
    ok-
    because
    yes.

    aaaaaaaaaaaaargh

  • Sury

    Member
    June 23, 2020 at 4:07 pm

    Estiwrites, this poem is very original. I had  to read it a few times to get the gist of it. It’s so so so true!! I love it. You’re reading my mind, or what?

  • Brocha

    Member
    June 23, 2020 at 5:36 pm

    Estiwrites, you said it.

  • A Willing Pen

    Member
    June 23, 2020 at 6:33 pm

    This is brilliant!
    I love it

  • A Willing Pen

    Member
    June 23, 2020 at 7:37 pm

    Genius!

  • Anagrammer

    Member
    June 23, 2020 at 11:19 pm

    Exactly! Exactly!! Exactly!!!

    This is so clever, so painfully true. I read it aloud to myself and really felt those vibes… Arrgggh!

  • Leahle

    Member
    July 2, 2020 at 5:38 pm

    Aaaaarrrrrrgggghhh!!!!

    So, so true Estiwrites!!!!!!

     

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