MemberJune 3, 2020 at 4:42 pm
There’s something magnetic about that poem. Each line made me have to read that next line. You just drew me in, I felt the pain and the lack and the gaping void and it was just so…sad, but not in a depressing way. Like, you are using your suffering to lift you up, not letting it drag you down.
I liked how there was no obvious rhyme or structure, for this piece I think that the freestyle brings out the best in it.