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  • Esther

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    June 3, 2020 at 4:42 pm

    There’s something magnetic about that poem.  Each line made me have to read that next line.  You just drew me in, I felt the pain and the lack and the gaping void and it was just so…sad, but not in a depressing way.  Like, you are using your suffering to lift you up, not letting it drag you down.

    I liked how there was no obvious rhyme or structure, for this piece I think that the freestyle brings out the best in it.

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