MemberMay 27, 2020 at 7:40 pm
Elisheva, it looks like you have a very detailed picture going on here.
Unfortunately I can’t advise you on its selling ability. As far as I know, there are many Jewish novels featuring intense shalom bayis issues. Personally, I’m more into reading adventurous stories (think historical fiction…) so I’m not so well versed, but that’s just my personal preference. There are plenty who love this kind of fiction.