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  • A Willing Pen

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    May 13, 2020 at 6:38 pm

    Thanks for all the feedback, everyone! This just came pouring out of me. To be honest, being pregnant was at first obviously the most glorious experience and then the nasuea and the scare were some of the most terrifying times. I wanted to get critique on how to better portray those rough times but the feedback seems to say this is light, cute, fun…i don’t know how I feel about that. But I guess it works?

    I’m not sure myself how I would edit it- this is a rough, raw, first draft, unedited besides for a few tweaks on fruit names 🙂 I just went with what flowed. I’d love to publish it maybe at the end of Family First column, as one of those personal essays. Is it good enough, does it portray the journey well?

    That’s what I wanted critique for. If it’s deemed good, sure, let’s move it to showcase 🙂 And I’ll be asking for advice on how to submit 🙂

     

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